六年級(jí)英語作文及點(diǎn)評(píng)：Zoom’s Weekend

 　　Zoom’s Weekend

　　Zoom had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, he washed his clothes and went to a park. He did his homework and went fishing on Saturday afternoon. On Sunday morning, he cleaned his room and visited his grandparents. He played football and watch TV on Sunday afternoon. Zoom was too tired.

　　【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　寫法：這篇習(xí)作是按時(shí)間順序記敘了Zoom的周末活動(dòng)。

　　時(shí)態(tài)：這篇文章可以用三種時(shí)態(tài)來寫，由于本單元主要講的是一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，所以我們采用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)比較合適。

　　句型：主語+動(dòng)詞過去式+過去時(shí)間。

　　注意：活動(dòng)的相關(guān)表達(dá)法采用新舊知識(shí)結(jié)合的方法，但要注意動(dòng)詞過去式的拼寫。